Thesis+Statement

= THESIS STATEMENT S =

A [|thesis statement] is an arguable statement used in any analytical paper. The thesis is typically one sentence, and it often appears at the end of the introductory paragraph. A thesis statement must be strong in order for the paper to be a success. A weak thesis, such as "Miles Davis' life affected his music," will lead to a vague, poorly developed essay. Be concise in your thesis! However, do not create a three-pronged thesis. This research paper will be much more than a 5-paragraph essay.

Remember - a good thesis statement is not:

 * A statement of fact.
 * The Treaty of Versailles was signed by the four major powers and became effective January 1920.
 * Merely the expression of a personal opinion.
 * I think the Treaty of Versailles was a foolish mistake.
 * A vague generalization.
 * The Treaty of Versailles caused the world a lot of problems.
 * A question.
 * Was the Treaty of Versailles a major force in precipitating World War II?

(//Research Paper Procedures// by Amy Kleppner)